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In a world
Contributed by
LexiLovesU
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 03:29:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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We live,
and breathe,
in a world,
full of,
pain,
anger,
judgement,
HATE!
Why do we?
HOW DO WE?
People live on the streets,
the ones our cars drive over,
they live off our garbage,
the stuff we find no use in,
because we are spoiled.
Poverty covers a continent.
Their people are,
hunger,
tired,
sick,
confused,
angry,
and a lot,
DEAD!
Some try and help,
but others,
don't lift a finger.
HOW SELFISH ARE WE?
Then comes judgement,
some HATE others,
because,
of their,
race,
gender,
age,
religion.
They can be,
beaten,
slaved,
used,
KILLED!
I ask you,
How fair is that?
We,
and i mean,
all of us,
need to,
help,
search,
reach out,
find,
hope,
CARE.
For those in need.
Do you care?
What can you do?
We NEED everyone.
I believe we can be more than,
Peacelovers,
lets be,
Peacemakers.
Copyright ©
LexiLovesU
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2010-11-10 15:29:49]
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Re: In a world
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by RowenM on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 03:33:22 PM AEST
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Last line complements the whole request magnificently.
This is a wake-up call, for all of us.
"Let's be peacemakers"
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Re: In a world
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by RunawayAngel on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 04:08:28 PM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: In a world
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 09:49:53 AM AEST
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| Very well written. This is full of solid imagery and sends out a clear message to us all. Well done and thanks for sharing. |
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Re: In a world
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by petulinka on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 03:49:28 PM AEST
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| i like a lot as well, thou i would use the last line a bit differently,,i mean i understand,,its nice and great thought thou for me this word doesnt go there..thou its great poem as i said!! |
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