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terminus
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:57:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Into the wind the truth is blown,
Until the world is fully grown,
And as the humans bleed it dry,
It hides in fear and tries to cry.
And once the waters turn to black,
The world will burn until it cracks,
And when the sky turns fire red,
All humanity, the earth will shed.
Into the pit of sorrow sown,
A horrible fate has been shown,
And when the time comes due to pay,
Heartless men will lead the way.
With all the tears and all the pain,
The world will break and be renamed,
And at the time of brightest night,
The world is swallowed by the light.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2010-11-10 05:57:44]
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Re: terminus
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 07:11:15 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I love the last stanza.
It's wonderful.
~> ayanna |
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Re: terminus
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 07:50:36 AM AEST
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Sounds like a tribulation/rapture type of deal. Well It'll work out better in the end. ;-)
Nicely done. |
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