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Sad
Contributed by
LizzyC
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Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 03:51:29 PM in AEST
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Sad
I feel like I am as low down
down low like a helpless ant
as they watch me injured
limp across a rock
they laugh as the foot
comes down
they walk on
like a bunch of tigers
I sit there
crying
half dead
I watch them
as my eyes close
my breathing stops
I cry
Sad
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2010-11-09 15:51:29]
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Re: Sad
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by trackiller2006 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 04:01:35 PM AEST
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Never let people make you sad. No matter what happens always keep your head up and shine, because you, my dear, have a gift that others would surely give their lives for. And this was a great display of talent by the by.
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Re: Sad
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 07:20:21 PM AEST
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Track is right, you shouldn't let others bring you down. It can be hard sometimes...a good way to think is that they're only being the way they are to you because they have a problem...maybe someone brought them down...
Be as you are, and let others be as they are, and worry only about when your next meal might be...it's the only important thing after all. ^_^ |
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Re: Sad
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 04:40:13 AM AEST
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Dear Lizzy,
I feel your pain
They have no shame
Slander and Gossip, is their game
But I'll tell you a secret, so come close in order to hear
It's only an issue of time, before the Almighty
will repay them a little fear! |
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Re: Sad
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 03:48:20 PM AEST
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When you are down,
and wear a sad frown,
please just try to smile,
and laugh for a while.
The world can be cruel,
but remember this rule,
there is no shame in sadness,
the world's full of madness,
But at the end of your life,
if all you have is your strife,
then you will be mad,
that you were always so sad.
So forget about the pain,
and go dance in the rain,
because at the end of the day,
it is they who will pay. |
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