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Lost in a Cage
Contributed by
JJAA_91
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 08:24:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I look to the sky
as the rain washes over my face,
and I wonder why
without any guilt, remorse or grace,
why inside I cry
A reflection I do not know as me
A voice I cannot understand
I, no-one wants to see
me, I cant stand
Continue I do
to look up and wonder how to be-
come somebody new,
the price to be paid, its worth the fee.
Pain will be withdrew.
With one swift action its done.
Far too deep this time.
All I can do
is wait to
become
free
Copyright ©
JJAA_91
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2010-11-09 08:24:49]
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by bleedinheart on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 08:38:54 AM AEST
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| i feel ur pain as i 2 want to be set free |
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 08:52:23 AM AEST
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| Wow really liked this write you used the words just right really liked it keep writting. |
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by 2bpositive on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:52:14 AM AEST
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I share your pain
I too, feel lame
Finding that freedom from within
Is what living is all about
nice write! |
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by Zeberdee on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 11:38:32 AM AEST
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| great poem, I really enjoyed it |
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by trackiller2006 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 04:04:18 PM AEST
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| very nice use of imagery! I loved it. I too feel your pain |
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 02:06:33 AM AEST
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Freedom comes from life and from pain,
you have to learn how to play its sweet game,
and when you do, your life will turn around,
It'll throw you for a loop, and turn you upside down.
lol
so reach into your soul and find,
that freedom that is in your mind. |
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Re: Lost in a Cage
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 09:21:07 PM AEST
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this is an extremely beautiful write...great work!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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