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A Deeper Darkness.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 08:07:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There's a darkness I sometimes see
And it tries to make a friend of me
And swiftly bring me down
There's a silence that I hear
That has me shed a solitary salty tear
And turn my smile to a frown
And sometimes when I see a blue sky
That darkness is lingering somewhere near by
Eager to blacken out the sun
Then I will the sunshine to be strong
To pick me up and sweep me along
And set the darkness on the run
There's a moment that I know
That will always ebb and flow
In the deepest corners of my mind
But for now I will willingly take
All the good times that we make
And pray to leave the darkness far behind.
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cashfan1
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2010-11-09 08:07:35]
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Re: A Deeper Darkness.
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by duff on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:40:44 AM AEST
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You can feel that faith is right there with as you try and leave behind whats troubling you. Making the best of things and keeping perspective. This was well written.
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Re: A Deeper Darkness.
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by LexiLovesU on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 03:33:24 PM AEST
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| Very intresting and full of emotion |
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Re: A Deeper Darkness.
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by spud on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 08:25:43 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
A fine way of expressing what we all feel at some
time or other - that the world and life is not always
roses and gaiety.
Hang in there, my friend - the clouds will lift.
Tommy
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