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Run Away.
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:17:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I just want to run away,
All on my own,
I'm pretty sure that I'd be better off,
Going it alone,
I don't need your hand to hold,
Your eyes to get me through the day,
I'm fine without you now,
And I'll be fine when I run away,
I'm sick of so much conformity,
I just want to feel something real,
I want to be somewhere that I can,
Eventually learn to heal,
There's nothing to make me stay here,
Only things to make me go,
You don't think I'll do it but,
There's so much you'll never know,
You needn't bother getting in touch,
There's nothing left to say,
You're not the reason I'm leaving,
And you won't be the reason I stay.
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Bexstasy
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2010-11-09 05:17:54]
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Re: Run Away.
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by bleedinheart on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 12:11:54 PM AEST
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| very good and ture wish i could run away |
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Re: Run Away.
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by jamesatteb on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 09:28:48 AM AEST
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I love your writing ,the emotions are so raw and real just like mine,seems we have been through similar things before and it shows through our writings.
keep it up ,you do beautiful work ! :) |
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Re: Run Away.
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:36:51 AM AEST
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| Good job loved the way you used the words keep using that gift you have. |
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Re: Run Away.
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:46:43 PM AEST
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Strong words you've written here. Is running away from it all the right decision? Or the easy decision? Only you make that choice.
Chris. |
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Re: Run Away.
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by huwbeauty on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 03:19:40 AM AEST
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| really nice writing,to the point and with honesty. |
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