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GIVE ME YOUR HAND

Contributed by 2bpositive on Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 10:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Joshua Adam is my name

2bpositive has been my aim

While navigating my soul through this world of confusion

I have found solace in friendship and that's my conclusion

If it's your reading and voting you think I aspire

Your heart is empty, your friendship do I desire

To release my thoughts, does my soul await

Hoping for your love, that it not abate

Again, I feel compelled to state

That 2bpositive is my only true fate

And after 120 when my body is no longer

My soul shall continue to be ever so stronger

To the next world will I be brought

To stand trial for all that I taught

And as they review my life before my eyes

I will not shudder for I told no lies

Now as my judgement is about to be found

my soul rejoices unbound

With true confidence will I surely declare

Loyal to truth was my only care

Only with you my true friend will I say

Give me your hand that we may pray

To the end of life's road have we now come

To accept our actions and our own outcome

Please send comments to: shooksta@gmail.com

Copyright © 2bpositive ... [ 2010-11-08 22:13:11]
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Re: GIVE ME YOUR HAND (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST
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Nice you do have a gift keep using that

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