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Calculated
Contributed by
duff
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Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 09:38:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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An addition to my life you
Were the perfect sum
Counting day’s time ticked in a
Softness never heard by my ears
Equals since inception
Somewhere we divided
Fractions of your heart
Couldn't satisfy my own
Our chemistry failed leaving
Too many variables to follow
Killing the equation
I am no longer your problem
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-11-08 21:38:13]
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Re: Calculated
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 02:00:04 AM AEST
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Duff
another fantastic piece of poetry, you never disappoint the reader and indeed you always leave us looking forward to the next one. |
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Re: Calculated
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by northernlights on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 12:06:10 AM AEST
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| I am no longer your problem,I can feel the cold calculation running through this and the combination of emotion with logical calculation leaving a very harsh dismissive feel and I think bringing the full meaning of the title to life! well written |
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Re: Calculated
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by ming on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:19:12 AM AEST
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This whole poem rocks...here is my fav lines;
Our chemistry failed leaving
Too many variables to follow
Killing the equation
I am no longer your problem
ming |
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Re: Calculated
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by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 11:47:39 PM AEST
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duff
this really is good stuff.
I'm terrible at math, but this calculation
really is well balanced.
thumbs up.
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