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LONELINESS - Its True Meaning
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 03:50:29 AM in AEST
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Loneliness is despair
Loneliness is something to beware
Loneliness is the thought today
Of no tomorrow
Loneliness is wishing to cry
Without knowing why
Loneliness is a simple feeling
Without a simple answer
Loneliness comes
Loneliness goes
Loneliness is that uninvited guest
Who visits, always without a request
Loneliness is a sickness
You my friend are the cure
Together we will stengthen
And together we will endure.....
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Re: LONELINESS - Its True Meaning
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by windowguy on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 09:44:15 AM AEST
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| Simply stated, no big words, yet, it packs a punch. Love the uplifting conclusion. |
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Re: LONELINESS - Its True Meaning
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by bleedinheart on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 11:05:02 AM AEST
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| short and simple well put |
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Re: LONELINESS - Its True Meaning
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 02:01:18 AM AEST
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I can definitely relate to the first three stanzas. Very well defined. The fourth would simply be a dream for me.
Nicely written.
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Tim
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Re: LONELINESS - Its True Meaning
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 08:08:10 PM AEST
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| I just wrote a poem about loneliness, so this one caught my eye. I like your ending. It is so simple, but so true. |
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