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Let Go
Contributed by
snooki
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Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 10:31:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Remebering the sharp blade
All the hardcore pain
Depression controled my mind
Trying to leave the past behind
Life just past by
All i could do is cry
The urge just pushed me
I wasnt the somone i wanted to be
Everything was gone away
A fake smile saying "im okay"
I was lving a big lie
All I wanted was to rest my
head let go and Die!
Savanna Elaina Patterson
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snooki
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2010-11-07 10:31:34]
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Re: Let Go
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 02:20:30 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
this is sad but well done.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Let Go
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by monkeylove on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 12:24:35 PM AEST
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| i felt that way before...maybe still feel that way but over all its really good |
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