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CRYING LIKE A WATERFALL
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 01:25:34 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Everything we did
Just made it feel so right
We would kiss and hug
And hold each other through the night
And everytime that you touched me, I can't pretend
That I wanted it to end
What if anyone knows?
What if they've seen the signs?
It would not stop us now
Because this love feels so divine
And everytime that you kissed me, I can't pretend
That I wanted it to end
When you're crying like a waterfall
You look so beautiful
I won't deny
You beg me not to leave
You'll give me all I need
I can't say 'Goodbye'
And I really should just walk away...
But I won't even try
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chrisdavid
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2010-11-06 13:25:34]
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Re: CRYING LIKE A WATERFALL
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by duff on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 02:20:07 PM AEST
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Past the point of no return. So excited with too many emotions to think coherently when you are at that stage. Strong write and well written.
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Re: CRYING LIKE A WATERFALL
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 04:53:16 PM AEST
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Wow, friend, I heard that loud and clear.
Keep up the great writing.
huggs, blessings,
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