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a love lost long ago
Contributed by
bleedinheart
on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 01:20:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A Love Lost Long Ago
Once upon a time I would have said
I’d love you until forever ends
You took my heart and broke it
But I still love you with all the little pieces
But leaving you made me stronger
Because loving you and not been loved in return
Made me wish I could die
I can’t make you love me.
A thousand words wouldn’t bring you back
Nor a thousand tears
But I’ll keep a part of you with me.
You thought me how to love
Then you left with out telling me how to stop
You’d make me cry then you’d walk away
Like a fool I always followed
Just to me pushed away
You made me feel invisible.
You crushed my soul you broke my heart
Stole my dreams, my passion, my life
And still I ask why you’re gone.
I hope when you think of me
You think what you could of have
But let go.
So I leave you now without a word
Because words would only
Make it feel real.
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bleedinheart
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2010-11-06 13:20:22]
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Re: a love lost long ago
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by rexo on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 01:23:03 PM AEST
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| This a very strong poem, how do u stand up and go on? By letting go. |
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Re: a love lost long ago
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by jgaryfischer on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 09:09:38 AM AEST
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| Too familiar..... I can relate all too well..... Nice writing |
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