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As The Raindrops Fall By
Contributed by
bhav
on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the raindrops fall by,
There is a sinking feeling in my heart,
I feel as if we have been torn apart.
As the raindrops fall by,
Our life rotates like the game of dice.
It feels as if no one is mine.
As the raindrops fall by,
So are my tears.
I say it’s not raindrops by my teardrops,
But still they are washed away.
As the raindrops fall by,
The whole environment feels fresh,
It hurts, I feel as if again my wounds have become fresh.
As the raindrops fall by,
Accompanied by thunder and lighting,
Was loving you a mistake? , I am left pondering.
Copyright ©
bhav
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2003-04-20 19:35:00]
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Re: As The Raindrops Fall By
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by sodapopsuicide on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 07:46:18 PM AEST
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| wow great write, i like it a lot <3 |
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Re: As The Raindrops Fall By
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 09:12:19 AM AEST
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Sodapopsuicide,
Thanks a bunch for liking my poem .it was my pleasure to be acknowledged for my work.
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