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Cliche
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 02:32:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I have no compassion,
for hearts that cry;
over love, which never was;
but a clever disguise,
a blatant line,
to sweep you off your feet,
time after time,
a fool's monopoly
I hear your story,
on sorrow's bed,
Munchausin by Proxy;
the parallel,
tales of broken hearts,
and disenchanted dreams;
a hopeless romantic;
disconsolate beings
No pity should be spent
on disillusionment,
in a society;
where morals quake,
on shaky ground,
it's plain to see,
your love,was but a cliche.
Copyright ©
UNORTHODOX
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2010-11-05 02:32:16]
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Re: Cliche
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by duff on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 11:44:40 AM AEST
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Outside the box and a very intelligent write on a topic that has become a cliche over the years. Money has taken over a feeling that should be sacred but sadly that is not the case. Fantastic write.
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Re: Cliche
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by bleedinheart on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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| not lik other poems good write |
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Re: Cliche
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by petulinka on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 03:15:18 PM AEST
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| quite unusual!!like it |
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Re: Cliche
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by 2bpositive on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 10:09:29 AM AEST
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This really hits it on the nail.
Living with lies that are only disguise
for failure to read the signs
the life we sometimes lead is filled with that greed
and "disillusionment" could never be freed.
After reading this, I realise I'm still a junior.
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