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Aesthetics of Enlightenment
Contributed by
Aspirant
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 02:18:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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I've seen it all, I know it all, my mind is opened wide
If you want to be like me, follow the flying broccoli
You've got to take that puny mind and make it see the light
Here it comes so open wide and seek what seekers seek to hide
Nothing true in truth exists, nothing right in "right and wrong"
One proof cannot prove itself, a singer cannot sing a song
The wise man knows he doesn't know, the brave man fears he does
Hold on I'm goin'a make me a turkey sammich.
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2010-11-03 02:18:47]
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Re: Aesthetics of Enlightenment
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:30:35 PM AEST
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| nice. catchy write, made me think and chuckle. good job |
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Re: Aesthetics of Enlightenment
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 03:02:28 PM AEST
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| Don't forget the waffle fries. For free. lol but seriously, i think you are contradicting yourself in this poem just a liiiittle bit haha but maybe that's the point. As for following the flying broccoli, I'll pass on that one. |
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Re: Aesthetics of Enlightenment
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by Voyager on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 04:05:01 AM AEST
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| Good rhyme structure and liked how the peom reads....nice underlying meaning as well and written in a light hearted manner. |
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Re: Aesthetics of Enlightenment
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 03:31:50 PM AEST
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The flying broccoli had me admonishing myself for premature judgement of what might be tied~in w/ something absolutely genius yet to come...hmmm...So, I read on...conceding to you some points & debating w/ you others...hmmm...taking you ever so seriously...hmm...'til your jive turkey close...and, and...*gasping* It's been a long time since I laughed til I cried :-)))
To you, kind sir...a tip o' the hat & heartfelt thank you for the experience!!! |
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