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Crack!
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 08:40:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Crack!
Ouch! My poor back
I think it just went, crack!
It’s the cold weather you see
So cold gets into it and the pain starts
I feel the searing pain and it lasts for hours
To relax, dream of floating flowers down stream
Take some pain killers
Drift out throughout the day
Feel sleepy and drunk
Shooting pain interrupts
Very bitter to swallow
Bring on warm days
So this cold back ache will subside
By banjosandwitch 10/07/10
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2010-11-02 08:40:52]
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Re: Crack!
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by 2bpositive on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 04:35:14 AM AEST
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Very nice, art poetry.
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Re: Crack!
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by UAnwar on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:23:25 AM AEST
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Very interesting poem,
I enjoyed the use of onomatopoeia
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