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While
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 05:25:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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While
While I’m a poor poet
You are a rich computer surfer
While you go to the Caribbean
I go to the caravan
While you go to fancy restaurants
I have a fakeaway (home made takeaway)
While I have lots of free time
You work all the hours of your life
While I relax and watch TV
You ponder your stocks and shares
While I am wrinkle free faced happy go lucky cheeky chappy
You are an overpaid, over stressed worrier
You would love my life, but not my lack of cash
I’d love your cash but hate your stressed ness
Let’s take a breath for a while and smile
By banjosandwitch 23/07/10
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banjosandwitch
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2010-11-01 05:25:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: While
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 05:54:25 AM AEST (User
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Interesting write and view of the stresses we face
but it was and is a good piece. So often we get so
caught in the stresses of life we forget to slow down
and enjoy the simple things. Thanks for this piece
it was a good read and being in the military I can
relate to the daily stress that over powers my life.
Enjoy life for what it is and don’t let in consume you
as a whole but let it compliment ever essence of
your being.
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