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Time Passing By
Contributed by
myusername
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Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 11:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Would freezing time be a crime?
A crime I would commit.
With only four weeks left until the end,
Second by second life is lived,
until it is taken away
Stolen by that man that no one has ever met.
He says your time is up and do as you have commit.
I have no choice, but to do as he says
for I swore I would never quit
Four weeks left and my life will soon split.
Half will stay behind
the rest is off to do as I commit.
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2010-10-31 23:47:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time Passing By
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 01:31:26 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very sad but well written.
I was just wondering if you are dieing?
blessings,
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