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The best thing that I’ve ever seen
Contributed by
po-it
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Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 06:11:50 PM in AEST
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The best thing that I’ve ever seen
More clear than my slim plasma screen
Was not the Whistler glacier snow
That sight was really stunning though
Niagara falls, the way they flow
No that’s not it, but they were OH!!!
The first time that I saw a lake
And first time I saw a snowflake
Both times had left me speechless, yes
Other sights surpassed nonetheless
My smile when high-school days were done
Was quite the sight, but not the one
My grade of 94%
That sight just left me so content
The sight of people clap and bow
After I read my poem, wow
That was my sister’s wedding too!
Oh what a day and what a view
Those sights were great, that said and done
No, none of them are quite the one
The best sight that I’ve seen so far
Was seeing you for who you are
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Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 10:05:43 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen
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by thistle_and_fern on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 02:28:21 AM AEST
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Thank you for posting this poem - I love the line
"The best sight that I’ve seen so far
Was seeing you for who you are"
Be good if we could all have a "lightbulb" moment when we see people for who they really are instead of the masks we put up.
Bless.
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Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen
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by sride686 on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 06:02:46 AM AEST
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Wow is that all I need to say about this write.
It must be amazing to realize that you can see
and love someone for whom and what they
are completely. Great write and I hope all has
worked out for the poem conveys that you
truly love what you have found in this person.
Great write and thanks for posting it hit home
for me.
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Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen
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by thridan on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 07:32:46 PM AEST
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| humorous yet expresses what you want to say ! :) |
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