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In this Mind of Mines
Contributed by
brialuv
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Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 05:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My thoughts wander
All over uncontrollably
One thought I can't seem to escape
I wonder are you thinking of me
Am I on your mind as much as you are on mines
Give me some kind of warning or a sign
So I don't feel as foolish
Thinking of you as much in this mind of mines
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Re: In this Mind of Mines
(User Rating: 1 ) by po-it on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 06:06:56 PM AEST (User
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I like it but I especially like the beginning two lines
My thoughts wander
All over uncontrollably
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Re: In this Mind of Mines
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 03:43:44 PM AEST (User
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Short and sweet.................and to the point.
You've got your message across without wasting anything.
Nice write.
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