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The Night Prowler
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 03:33:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm to scared
to turn the lights out
cause
I got a feeling
something ain't right,
eerie sensations got me
wide awake tonight.
I'm just heard something tap upon the window
I see shadows
dancing in the moonlight,
creepy crawling things
are causing me such fright.
Whispering voices
now have me tingling
and
fear shoots up my spine,
as the lights go out
something evil
drops into my mind.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2010-10-29 03:33:00]
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Re: The Night Prowler
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 30th October 2010 @ 07:20:22 AM AEST
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| Wow, dark indeed! I love the rhyme and flow of this. Very well written. |
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Re: The Night Prowler
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 06:58:46 AM AEST
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Great for Halloween, I suppose that was your intentions.
Good to see you writing again.
Big huggs, smiles, spooks,
emy |
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Re: The Night Prowler
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 01:39:43 PM AEST
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| perfectly written. i really like this. this would be good for a horror movie. |
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