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Black Autumn(Undertone)
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 02:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fine scope,twined rope
your majesty's perception,
octaves peak,
on shattered tones;
conjured self importance,
blackness fell;
on hollow walls,
innocence the martyr
Through shadows watch,
the timeless clock,
this season's made for prey,
minds that bleed; misanthropy,
reside on paths of silence,
a midnight spill,on streets unveiled;
society's reflection
Presuming fate,the fool's dismay,
arrived in startled swiftness,
the raven's flight,transformed the night,
to something less than human
no time for tears,no room for fear,
another black autumn
Copyright ©
UNORTHODOX
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2010-10-28 14:49:58]
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Re: Black Autumn(Undertone)
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by duff on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 07:38:22 PM AEST
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What awesome imagery!! This was a great read full of darkness and has such an eerie feel to it. Again, great imagery and a really nice piece of writing.
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Re: Black Autumn(Undertone)
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 03:05:03 AM AEST
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Wow! could this be much darker, more sinister?
It is a truly great piece of writing that is full of images and dark under tones. Many thanks for sharing. |
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