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Moving On
Contributed by
RowenM
on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 02:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I wrote your name on the sand;
tears rolling down my face.
I wrote your name on the sand;
a salty breeze giving way.
I wrote the date we met on the sand;
for that I will always remember.
I wrote the date we met on the sand;
that cold and old December.
An innocent wave erased your name.
An innocent wave erased our date.
I secretly smiled inside,
and silently walked away.
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2010-10-28 14:16:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Moving On
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 03:08:49 AM AEST (User
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Brilliantly written. This is a sad poem but the words you have woven around your subject are truly inspiring. Well done. |
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