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untitled
Contributed by
kassi124
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Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 01:22:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A primitive dance,
started by a sultry glance
lusting for the chance
shivers roll down your spine
trails of fingertips so divine
our bodies entwine
a moment of peace
together our thoughts will cease
a perfect release
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2010-10-28 13:22:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 11:13:19 PM AEST (User
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thought provoking indeed.
but if you keep the gift in the gift wrap
the suspence might be even bigger
nice write. |
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