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Shadows and Tears
Contributed by
duff
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Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 10:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Breaking your will to stand
a single rose fades to black
The rain crawls outside the window
leaving you blind inside this isolated existence
It's quiet breath always lurking
with your smile on the trigger
Howls of denial come forth followed
by brains bleeding sanity
It begs thee to finish the bottle
so the fairytale aftermath
preludes your demise
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-10-26 22:43:45]
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Re: Shadows and Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 03:23:08 AM AEST
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| i could read your poems all day long they have so much fire in them keep up the good work |
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Re: Shadows and Tears
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by potentialpoet96 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:32:08 PM AEST
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| keep it upp. fantastic write (: |
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Re: Shadows and Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 12:17:56 AM AEST
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Sad, dark, and dreary. I tend to think though, whether in a drunken stupor or just down right depressed, we'd end up in a worse place if one decides to kill one's self...kinda the ultimate karma.
Poem is very well done. If definitely put the scare in me.
Thanks,
Tim |
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