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I'm just not...
Contributed by
kadie
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Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 07:38:24 PM in AEST
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I am not just some girl
I am not any girl
I am not the other girl
Honey, if you would just open your eyes
And realize that I AM
The girl
I am your girl.
There isn’t any other girl
In this whole world
Like me!
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kadie
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2010-10-26 19:38:24]
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Re: I'm just not...
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by po-it on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 09:33:18 PM AEST
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| I like the honest expression. Short and sweet. |
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Re: I'm just not...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:56:55 AM AEST
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| great piece, love it :) |
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Re: I'm just not...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 03:25:15 AM AEST
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| perfect writing fantastic, keep it up |
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Re: I'm just not...
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by RowenM on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:26:55 PM AEST
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It's quick, simple, and expresses the message.
Good job! |
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Re: I'm just not...
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by jcline5 on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 08:07:57 AM AEST
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| i wish that my ex could see how i see this in her and come back very excellent work |
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Re: I'm just not...
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 03:25:07 PM AEST
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This makes the case for
"telling it like it is"
Nice write
Steve |
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