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Where's my violin?
Contributed by
po-it
on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 09:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Well where’s my violin
The walls are closing in
My strength is wearing thin
And then creeps in the silence
And emptiness crawls in
And loneliness is at the door
Waiting to be let in
All all distraction fades away
And leaves me in my skin
Disarmed, alarmed, uncomfortable
And now the doubts dig in
They eat away till nothing’s left
They leave me bone and skin!
My self worth drains away
My chest calls on my chin
And inwards I just crumble down
I have nothing within
Nothing to hold me up
Nothing to help me win
I lost the battle and the war
So where’s my violin?
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po-it
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2010-10-25 21:56:59]
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Re: Where's my violin?
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by PetaWilliams on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 06:03:03 AM AEST
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| Thats really good!!!!! i absoloutly love it really!! :D good work! |
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Re: Where's my violin?
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by PetaWilliams on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 07:42:47 AM AEST
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| haha lol really i cant stop reading it i keep coming back to it it is really amazing, :D |
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Re: Where's my violin?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 03:29:34 AM AEST
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| wow amazing i do hope you keep it up you have such a talent that you need to share :) |
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