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Hallucinations
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 04:38:35 PM in AEST
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Hallucination
Possibly from deprevation
Lack of sleep
My mind seems to weep
I've begun seeing things all around
I think I'm even hearing sounds
Not all are unpleasent
But I still resent them
Because I know that they can never be real
that I'll never get to touch their faces and have them hold my hand and feel
The simple feeling of a long lost loved one
The only one that ever really mattered back then
the horrors I don't mind
Turely it seems they are sublime
I can be relaxed and calm
while I see spiders crawling on my palm
Unreal for me
because these hallucinations I only see
The past is the trying to grasp me
But all I want is to be set free
From the chains of reality
I want to be released from my morality
Maybe one day
This humanity will go away
And a new race
..a better race will arise
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Voice of the Silent
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2010-10-25 16:38:35]
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Re: Hallucinations
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by po-it on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 06:27:17 AM AEST
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well delivered meanings, and great reflection of emotion.
I think you're conflicted in a sense, by saying at times
"Not all are unpleasent
But I still resent them"
they saying
"the horrors I don't mind"
and
"I can be relaxed and calm"
Which adds more content and thought provoking meanings.
Good work.
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Re: Hallucinations
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by duff on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 12:34:43 PM AEST
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I like the complexity of your writing. I enjoy writing that takes you on a trip and this piece did that for me. Great job!
take care
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Re: Hallucinations
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by monkeylove on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 02:17:59 PM AEST
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| hey you of good at this |
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