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im giving it all for you
Contributed by
jcline5
on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 12:49:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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say what you want
do as you will
my love is true
so very real
do you have a clue?
what im doing for you
do you even know?
how i feel for you
my heart is pounding
every breath i take
its all for you
my angel on earth
you are so real
someting that feels
so strong
how can this be wrong?
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2010-10-25 12:49:04]
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Re: im giving it all for you
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by RowenM on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 03:02:31 PM AEST
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Confession right out of the heart.
Love it.
Love is never wrong, btw.
And, they usually know. (; |
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Re: im giving it all for you
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by shanat on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 02:43:35 AM AEST
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| great strong write!!! and moveing as well:)) |
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Re: im giving it all for you
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 08:13:45 AM AEST
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| shmaltzy |
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Re: im giving it all for you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 07:36:25 AM AEST
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| i know this feeling all too well but things will get better keep up the good work though |
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Re: im giving it all for you
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by midnightluna622 on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 10:37:27 AM AEST
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| yes i know love does stink doesnt it? i feel the same way about the one i love. |
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Re: im giving it all for you
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by monkeylove on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 02:16:32 PM AEST
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| that is so cute with lots of feeling of love to it...greAt job and ps u spelled 'something' wrong just saying |
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