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Just not ready yet
Contributed by
jcline5
on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 12:40:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its time to let go
Its time to go home
We had our fun
We made it last
Its all in the past
Went by so fast
Now its gone
Never to be found
Off it goes homeward bound
Your fading slowly
Now your gone
Never to be found
I hear this voice inside my head
Telling me
Its time to come home
Its time to let go
I dont want to do it
I keep ignoring it
But now your gone
Neve to be found
Copyright ©
jcline5
... [
2010-10-25 12:40:16]
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Re: Just not ready yet
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by RowenM on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 03:00:59 PM AEST
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Moving on is a really hard step. It's not fast, it's not easy...but it is always for the best.
Don't worry, take your time. As the title expresses it, you are just not ready.
Wait for the right time, it's ok to grieve.
Great work, btw! :) |
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Re: Just not ready yet
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by duff on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 12:01:05 PM AEST
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There is a feeling of anxiety I get when reading this and it reminds me of past times. I like the flow of it and it made for a really nice read.
take care
duff |
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Re: Just not ready yet
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by bleedinheart on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 11:13:38 AM AEST
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| touching i'm trying to move on 2 so reli hit hme to me |
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