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While We Are Still Young
Contributed by
RowenM
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Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 05:40:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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While we are still young
I want to tell you that I love you.
I want you to hold me
And never let go.
I want to be happy with you.
To go on a walk
Under the stars
And with the moon as our witness
Kiss you under their sparkling light.
Let’s run under the rain
And be free and happy.
And kiss some more
And hold our hands
And never let go.
So in a couple of years,
We shall be able to look back
And remember together
How much we loved each other
When we were still young.
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RowenM
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2010-10-24 17:40:48]
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Re: While We Are Still Young
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 02:14:38 AM AEST
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| This is simply but superbly written, full of emotion and depth of feeling. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: While We Are Still Young
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 04:07:37 AM AEST
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| what a lovely poem expertly written and full of emotion keep it up ;) |
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