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Loneliness
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 04:49:53 PM in AEST
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Loneliness engulfs me - everywhere I turn
Like a cancer eating up my soul
For company I yearn.
Loneliness engulfs me - whatever can I do?
Its bites into my very self
It makes me feel so blue.
Loneliness engulfs me - its driving me insane
In a crowded shopping mall
The darkness has my brain.
Loneliness engulfs me - Im fighting to get free
It strengthens as it goes along
Theres nothing left of me.
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Re: Loneliness
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by RowenM on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 05:08:20 PM AEST
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Loneliness engulfs everyone every now and then.
Your words simplify the beauty of it, while keeping it real. I enjoyed the reading! |
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Re: Loneliness
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by Sonibe on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 07:44:17 PM AEST
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| ....I know just how you feel....try to break free, but it's hold on you binds you even harder....my inner strength (music) helped me, kupo....find your inner strength and maybe it can help you too |
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Re: Loneliness
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by chrisdavid on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 12:22:47 AM AEST
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Aww... this is so sad. I really feel for you on this one. You always manage to capture the emotions in your write. Keep them coming.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Loneliness
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by kerissasmith on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 12:41:36 AM AEST
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loneliness, not something you like to feel
surround yourself with family and friends =] |
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Re: Loneliness
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by PetaWilliams on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 05:32:58 AM AEST
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| i really love this one, because it speaks to me partically, i can be in the most crowded places, and often thats where i feel the most alone |
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Re: Loneliness
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 12:27:56 PM AEST
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Fantastic piece, written with your usual flair and panache.It is hard when you feel lonely, everyone else's enjoyment at being part of a couple or group seems to be magnified when you feel by yourself.
As somone who knows you and thinks of you as a friend, I can honestly say to people out there
"This lady does not not deserve to be lonely"
Great work, hope you can call on me when you feel alone, though I know I'm so far away.
Steve |
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Re: Loneliness
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 09:28:54 PM AEST
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A nice write.
I can relate
to feeling of loneliness
I too gravitate.
But know,
Loneliness is a sickness
I, my friend, am that cure
together we will stengthen
and together we will endure.
always, 2bpositive.
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Re: Loneliness
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by JimKoz on
Friday, 20th December 2013 @ 12:37:26 AM AEST
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| I relate to this piece very greatly. It's kind of strange when you get to the point of being alone so much that you begin to like it. |
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Re: Loneliness
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 13th February 2014 @ 01:24:19 PM AEST
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This innervision I know well
hang in there.... |
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