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Dream
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 01:53:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I had a dream, you came to my door,
You only knocked once, then walked 'cross the floor.
You came where I lay, alone in my bed,
You sat down beside me, and thats when you said;
"I know that I left you, alone and so scared,
I know with my passing, you were not prepared,
But darling I love you, with all of my heart,
It wasnt my choice we should be apart."
" I saw all our future, fly away in the breeze,
And i couldnt stop it, I was down on my knees.
I saw you beside me, begging me not to go,
And I couldnt tell you, that I love you so".
"But Im here now to tell you, its okay to let go,
Im here to remind you, to let your love flow.
I know that you love me, with all of your heart,
But you need to continue, even though we are apart".
" I know that you think, you will not love again,
they cant see who you are, through all of your pain.
But someone is out there, who will see what I see,
he will love you like I do, just set your heart free".
"Open your heart up, dont close it up tight,
he is out there and waiting, you know I am right".
And at that very moment, you stood up to go,
You bent down to kiss me, my heart cried out no.
The tears were cascading, all down my face.
I whispered " I love you", as you walked out of my place.
I lay down on my pillows, and shut my eyes tight,
Was this just a dream? or did you visit tonight.
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Re: Dream
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by kerissasmith on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 04:25:10 PM AEST
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very emotional
well written
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Re: Dream
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by chrisdavid on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 12:00:57 AM AEST
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I can feel the tears in my eyes, What a great piece. Obviously you've lost someone so close to you, but whether it was a dream or not, the message is move on - there is someone else out there to love. A truly emotional write. Loved it!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 11:57:14 PM AEST
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I like this poem and the thought process that inspired it. 
I think they can visit us in dreams and in times when we're awake. Least I like to think so.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Dream
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 12:34:13 PM AEST
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Breathtaking and very poignant.
I was really moved by the sentiment contained within this, as so much of your work.
You write from the heart, such a big heart too, nobody can ever deny that.
You will love again because you are so easy to love.
Steve |
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