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He Left Me With A Note
Contributed by
Anbarean
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 11:02:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He came to me and ask me for my friendship
I deemed it I liked it and I accept it
He told me that how much he loves me
I felt it I perceived it and concurred it
He walked with me in the forest in the rain
I enjoyed it I loved it and I mean it
He holds my hand and said I’m yours forever
I stunned I astounded and I melt
He said, “but I have to go I came to tell you all this”
And he left me with a note
“Our life is not one but our souls are”
“I love you down here but I will meet you up there”
My tears shed my heart ache and my life blow me apart
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Anbarean
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2010-10-23 11:02:01]
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Re: He Left Me With A Note
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by kerissasmith on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 04:04:57 PM AEST
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very emotional
good writing
keep it up! |
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Re: He Left Me With A Note
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 03:08:58 AM AEST
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| I like the raw emotion you put into this poem. : ) It sounds like you really loved him. I know the feeling all too well. |
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