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First
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The first look,
connecting with your soul.
The first word,
speaking from your heart.
The first touch,
soft, gentle, endering.
The first kiss,
never skipping a beat.
Sitting there, gazing at the stars.
Your soul consumes me as I listen to the
waves meet the sand.
Clam quiet, peaceful,
speaking words of truth
coming from the depths of our being.
I gaze into your eyes, into you.
This all seems so unreal, amazing, perfect.
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ShadowsCloud
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2003-04-20 13:05:00]
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Re: First
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 02:33:26 PM AEST
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| a perfect poem. |
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Re: First
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 04:05:17 PM AEST
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absolutely breathtaking
Shari |
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Re: First
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by karoody on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 03:11:41 AM AEST
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a beautiful write, of a beautiful love...
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Re: First
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by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:37:11 PM AEST
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| this is pretty. i love it. i wish everything could be like this. then life would be perfect! thanks for the showing. |
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Re: First
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:51:17 PM AEST
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Was this a dream Candice or for real?
I cannot think of somwhere better than on the beach gazing at the stars in between gazing into eyes while having a lovely canoodling and conversation session with the one!
Wonderful imagery again here, wishing I were experiencing these feelings again tonight, and your words have helped my imagination.
Thankyou Candice
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: First
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 02:57:48 PM AEST
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Dean,
It is more dream, that real. But there is some reality it in, as it was written about Darik. I am glad that you like it.
ShadowsCloud |
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