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Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 09:18:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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All day long
The air has throbbed with an autumn song
The macho trees are shedding leafs
The last of summer snatched by seasoned thieves
And all the while
With a soft stubborn smile
The sun for summer grieves.
Now in late afternoon
The sky is sobbing in the gathering gloom
With the wind fluting in the chimney breast
This is the time of year I love best
With sheep on the burnished hill crying
The hawk fretting and the lake sighing
For autumn mellow autumn that fleeting guest.
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by Maple_Lion on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 10:12:46 AM AEST
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| Just wonderful.............Thanks! |
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by RowenM on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 02:04:27 PM AEST
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Yes! I think Autumn is the best one too! :D
Nice work! |
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by Sonibe on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 07:52:53 PM AEST
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| ....I absolutely love this poem, kupo!!....keep up the good works |
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by MatthewKerna on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 06:15:48 AM AEST
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Loved it,
great writing and genuinely made me feel big love for Autumn. |
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 07:07:45 PM AEST
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I'm feeling the Autumn, but also feeling a bit sorry for summer. Nice write.
Mickey |
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by shanat on
Tuesday, 26th October 2010 @ 02:47:15 AM AEST
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i just love to read any poetry about the seasons! thats 5/5 from me:))
shanat") |
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Re: Autumn, The Fleeting Guest.
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by spud on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 08:15:16 AM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
I love your descriptions and precision as always,
though I can't share your love of Autumn, except
in its early stages (harvesting and red and orange
colours) but let this not detract from what is a fine
piece of poetic observation.
Tommy
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