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Life, See Appendix 14
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 01:03:01 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Another paragraph missing
Washed away with the dishwater
Racing to the next comma
Thoughts scattered in yesterday's old clothes
Pages in unexpected order
Haphazard morning chases the clock
A series of footnotes
Missed calls and a diary unvisited
The title is me
A glance in the mirror verifies sanity
Narrative the work of another
Vague recollections of missed appointments
The ghostwriter pens another line
Worlds collide when the telephone rings
As the plot twists again
Tomorrow is already an oncoming storm
Margins play host to processed musing
Calendar markings puncture the future
Staccato sentences splashed by exclamations
Another day underpinned by madness
Life............See Appendix 14
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Re: Life, See Appendix 14
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 01:18:49 PM AEST
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Well hello handsome,
This is a very thought provoking write.
I can certainly relate.
Hang tuff.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Life, See Appendix 14
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by thistle_and_fern on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 02:37:27 PM AEST
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Can totally relate to this - I think we become so entrapped within our work and family obligations - we do forget about ourselves and there always seems to be someone else wanting something from us -
Life? Yes as you say "see Apendix 14.
Well done matey.
Keep smiling - it makes your eyes dance when you do.
Jules. |
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Re: Life, See Appendix 14
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by Violet_Fae on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 03:23:35 PM AEST
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| This is how I feel when I try to balance my family with working from home. Fantastic piece! |
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Re: Life, See Appendix 14
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by northernlights on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 08:03:42 AM AEST
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| What's a calendar what's a watch and what's a diary????? lol I can relate to this entirely and I think there is no cure but there is a good excuse a creative mind!! lol and I am sticking to it. Great write Steve hope you feel the empathy. |
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Re: Life, See Appendix 14
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by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 02:04:23 PM AEST
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I very much enjoyed reading 'Life, See Appendix 14' There is only one problem: I keep looking for Appendix 14 and somehow I can't find it; maybe I got a misprinted edition of 'Life?' At any rate, a great poem on an all-too-familiar theme -- probably for all poets here... (Did I say that already?) A very funny and tumultuous poem -- not for the weak-hearted. Thanks for many smiles -- FlintHunter
Contributed by puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, October 22 2010 @ 13:03:01 AEST
Topic: Life Poetry
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