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An Artist I Am
Contributed by
Evanescencefreak
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Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 08:14:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I'm painting a pretty picture
But my painting never stops
The blood it keeps on falling
And to the ground it drops
The blood that I release
As it flows away
Takes away my troubles
To deal with another day
I can forget my troubles
If only for a time
But it proves the thing I'm dreading
That my life is no longer mine
I can't control my actions
I can't control my thoughts
But it brings me some reliefe
Reliefe I've dearly sought
The blood that I realese
As it flows away
Reminds me i'm not dead
But that I will be some day
Copyright ©
Evanescencefreak
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2010-10-21 08:14:20]
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Re: An Artist I Am
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 10:11:23 AM AEST
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| wow such a lovely poem and a lovely way to express it.i like it |
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Re: An Artist I Am
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by emphaticplacebo on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 05:43:07 PM AEST
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| What a great poem! its so vivid in imagery and, while it does bring back memories of my own, reminds me of how writing about it can somehow make you feel a little better.
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