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If
Contributed by
voyage
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Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 12:03:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'll do and I would
Will make it if I could
For us and sake of love
But otherwise I wouldn't.
Let go, I let go too
Abandon, I will follow
For white flags taken down
All that we are wouldn't drown.
Please tell me you'll be here
For me when I need shield
I give you all I got now
If unreturned we bow out.
Copyright ©
voyage
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2010-10-20 12:03:55]
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Re: If
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by Anbarean on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 11:35:41 PM AEST
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| Its short and a lovely one...Very nice...keep it up |
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Re: If
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST
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| short sweet and perfect keep up the good work |
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