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Good morning stigma
Contributed by
zeberdee
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Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 03:10:35 AM in AEST
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I wake again to the lights of the city
A new day surrounded by my stigma
I could've been free but what a pity
that im stuck as a neurotic enigma
I make it to the bus and see a familiar face
his judging eyes beaming away on my shell
My temper flares up and my insides are set ablaze
temperatures rises and I feel like hell
Wish I could say they are all wrong
but none of them will listen to sense
so I plug in my headphone and cool down with a song
still with all the eyes on my back tryin to penetrate my defense
but I dont give in, I dont confirm their ideas of me
I ignore them, shake my head and try to live free
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zeberdee
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2010-10-20 03:10:35]
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Re: Good morning stigma
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by duff on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 09:50:07 AM AEST
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There are some good lines in this piece and this one in particular.
so I plug in my headphone and cool down with a song
I really dig that line.
take care
duff
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Re: Good morning stigma
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 03:14:32 AM AEST
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This is superb writing. Full of depth and meaning.
Well done. |
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Re: Good morning stigma
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 07:43:44 AM AEST
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| Wow liked the write poetry are feelings down in side us and the only way we can let people know how we feel are to write the words down keep using that gift you have. |
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