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Moving On
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 01:17:34 AM in AEST
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I look into your eyes
And I see a reflection,
The reflection of lies,
Our love changed direction.
I look into your heart,
And see indiscretion,
I thought you were smart,
You destroyed my perception.
I look at you now,
And all that I think,
Is why here, why now,
I can’t even blink.
I’m so full of shock,
I can’t even see,
Why you came to my block,
And confessed love for me.
The trust is gone,
My grief is set free,
But it won’t be long,
Until I am me.
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deusdeira
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2010-10-20 01:17:34]
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Re: Moving On
(User Rating: 1 )
by duff on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 09:52:46 AM AEST
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There is a nice flow to the writing and it all fits quite well.
I like these lines.
The trust is gone,
My grief is set free,
But it won’t be long,
Until I am me.
well done
duff
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Re: Moving On
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by xbabycyutie on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 06:25:13 PM AEST
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i know the feeling):
atleast uk whats ur next step
find urself.
ur better off :) |
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Re: Moving On
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 06:56:49 PM AEST
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there is pain and anguish here, but also hope,
time that moves, fixes what's broken. Time that
stands still cannot breathe, becomes stagnant
and smothers us. Moving on is all we can do.
It's the best thing for us. =)
I feel ya here
~> ayanna
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