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moments. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 07:51:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I pour myself from heart to page
you barely even notice. . .
back & forth, from pain to rage
a candidate for lotus.
I have no need to substitute
love for something less. . .
to regelate or mourn or hate
I only seek to bless. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-10-19 19:51:25]
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Re: moments. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 02:33:12 AM AEST
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Obviously I don't know who Renee is but I, and others, notice and appreciate you.  |
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Re: moments. . .
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by Spike on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 05:31:44 AM AEST
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elle, feels like a love poem - but then love has its many, many expressions. I enjoyed the phrasing, word choice and the lyrical metre. Good to see that you are firing on all poetic cylinders!
Spike
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Re: moments. . .
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:16:22 AM AEST
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| Cute write short but to the point nice job keep writting. |
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