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Fix Selfishness
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 11:50:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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....Selfishness should so
be labeled as a disease,
it kills from inside.
....I don't really know
how to make it go away,
it's made me regret.
....I thought that I've lived
the honourable knight's life,
I found out I lied.
....All help I've given
meant a good feeling for me,
with no reward(s) yet.
....I've got to change now
if I want my wife to stay,
which means sacrifice.
....I CAN sacrifice
if it means more family time,
I have to do it.
....selflessness is close
to killing the selfishness,
and a happy wife.
....I need some real help
to get rid of this garbage,
and fix my marriage.
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2010-10-18 23:50:11]
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Re: Fix Selfishness
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by ek_da_poet on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 11:56:12 PM AEST
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Nice short poem my friend. i liked the simplicity and structure of your piece, very unique.
fix selfishness :D
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Re: Fix Selfishness
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by kerissasmith on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 01:09:43 AM AEST
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sad =[
but very, very nice writing =] |
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Re: Fix Selfishness
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by 2bpositive on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 08:29:25 AM AEST
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Words from the heart enter the heart. Nice heartfelt write.
2bpositive, always.... |
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