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A Thought
Contributed by
omarzz
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Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 04:01:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Now here's a thought
See it through
Someone knows what you think
Someone knows what you do
Here's a point to ponder
Do you feel skies and wonder
Here's something to contemplate
Is it all chaos
Is it all fate
And there's a catch to make
One day you build
Another you break
In a joyous moment you are torn
Next wishing you were never born
One end
Many a door
Copyright ©
omarzz
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2010-10-18 16:01:31]
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Re: A Thought
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 04:15:55 PM AEST
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| it is such a nice poem I read I love it good work keep it up |
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Re: A Thought
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by Bexstasy on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 05:34:51 PM AEST
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| Oh, wow, I totally love this! Such great rhythm and does really leave you thinking! Brilliant. :) |
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Re: A Thought
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by duff on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 07:51:00 PM AEST
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A poem full of doors inviting us to step forward and take a chance to see what could be. A very interesting read.
take care
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Re: A Thought
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by FlintHunter on
Sunday, 18th September 2011 @ 04:54:58 PM AEST
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'A Thought' is a very thought-full poem. It is a poem of wisdom -- without being pretentious. Its language is easy to understand and easy to read. The poem makes you think. Thank you for giving us your intriguing words.
--FlintHunter
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