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you ruin me
Contributed by
bleedinheart
on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 03:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Thunder in my head trying to work out what to do
You used to be my sweat dream,
Now you’re my nightmare.
Thoughts of you linger with me and cause me so much hurt
I weep.
I’ve got to break free,
Free of the chains that tie me down.
When I’m with you I can not breathe
To afraid to speak I sit in silence and wish for happy days.
As long as I’m with you only sorrow shall I see.
No longer see the sunshine only dark clouds
In shapes of you.
I wrote your name on my heart but you ripped it away,
Just like our names washed away in the sand.
The fighter in me has died,
The joy in me is kept captive,
The smile I used to wear is a frown
In your presence.
Sleepless nights with you in mind,
my head is wrecked I can not think,
wish i could wake up and you’d be gone,
Leave me in peace and never show your face.
But you don’t.
Copyright ©
bleedinheart
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2010-10-16 15:00:21]
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Re: you ruin me
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by Bexstasy on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 05:38:52 PM AEST
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| This is good! Has a lot of feeling to it! |
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Re: you ruin me
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by krezrazor on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 01:54:22 AM AEST
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| nice job! |
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Re: you ruin me
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by duff on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 09:59:06 AM AEST
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Great imagery you have used here and the opening line is fantastic. There are so many well written lines. Great job!
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