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I Am Ashes
Contributed by
landsleyalexandre
on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 11:56:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Blindfolded by the dark and cornered by my adversaries
Forced to think that there wasn’t any option left for me
I fell apart, worst than a broken heart
But just like a broken glass, I was in pieces
My energy drained until there wasn’t anything left of me
I did not see, I couldn’t see what I was destine to be ever since the beginning
And here I thought I would have always been
Flesh and bones I thought I could have stayed
But my time came and I became nothing but ashes.
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landsleyalexandre
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2010-10-16 11:56:50]
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Re: I Am Ashes
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by Zeberdee on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 03:41:06 AM AEST
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| Awesome poetry, I sense a bit of betrayal and I love the metaphors makes the poem work on a more general level. Keep it up. |
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Re: I Am Ashes
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by girlbballjunky101 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 06:46:33 AM AEST
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| Love the poem |
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Re: I Am Ashes
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 09:49:33 PM AEST
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you've conveyed your downhearted emotions quite articulately.
i could very well empathize with your poem.
take care
-K.Z. |
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