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school of thought
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 11:52:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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that cityscape horizon
squinting through trees
cause conditions
wHere
to break free
and rise
in my
shallow dark
nes(t)
dumpster lids
slamming
foliage
going bare
facing
my alley
&
onto
next
poem.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-10-16 11:52:41]
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Re: school of thought
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 05:12:09 AM AEST
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lol Nice style and a great ending.
-Phil |
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Re: school of thought
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by elle on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 09:57:10 PM AEST
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Hi ming,
Great word play!! I've just about finished moving. (That's where I've been. :) I received your pm. Excellent idea. Whose was it, anyway? Phils? Thanks Phil. We'll have to make it happen.
Cheers! elle :) |
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Re: school of thought
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by kerissasmith on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 01:05:20 AM AEST
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nice going haha =]
keep it up!! |
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Re: school of thought
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 05:55:29 PM AEST
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This reminds me of my mother's story of moving to brooklyn from Schenectady (upstate new York). Drastic events occured for her and she grew depressed but eventually became happy when she moved to Long Island. Thank you for this work of literature,
Deidra |
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