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Double vision.
Contributed by
cashfan1
on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 06:43:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Six wild geese gliding slowly.
Ghost birds buoyed by the smooth water,
Each a shadow of the other.
A wind is restless,
Serenading the rushes of the mountain lake.
Evening sunshine eases the pain of summer's ending.
For a moment the air stills
But then the wind raises and with a loud pop
The water is shattered, like the mirror of my imagination,
Into a million micro chards
And the six geese become twelve,
Each watching the other's other self,
Following without question, the other's image.
And then the wind eases back to a soft breeze,
The water reforms, my mind clears,
And the twelve become six again.
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2010-10-15 06:43:47]
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Re: Double vision.
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by Bexstasy on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 04:49:23 PM AEST
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| Wow, I love the imagery! |
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Re: Double vision.
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 09:30:14 PM AEST
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Good write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Double vision.
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 09:42:18 PM AEST
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Oh my
this is so good
wish I flow like you do,
well done.
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