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Leaving Me
Contributed by
kerissasmith
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Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 12:07:35 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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You left me without a goodbye,
A kiss, a wave or even a smile.
When you left i didnt know what id do,
now i just stay at home missing you.
As the days go by i sit and smile,
at the photo's of you and me.
im wasting my time, but i find,
its the only way i can get by.
knowing it'll never be the same,
not while there's still an eternal flame.
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kerissasmith
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2010-10-15 00:07:35]
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Re: Leaving Me
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by chrisdavid on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 01:04:32 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the read. Just a question, why did this guy leave without saying goodbye?
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Leaving Me
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by Bexstasy on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 04:52:42 PM AEST
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| I quite like this. :) It's simple and that works really well! |
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Re: Leaving Me
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 02:04:04 AM AEST
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| This is simplicity at it's best. Very basic in construction but very well executed. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Leaving Me
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by bleedinheart on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 06:18:36 AM AEST
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| going through the same good poem |
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Re: Leaving Me
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by brialuv on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 12:56:17 PM AEST
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| a short poem that is filled with emotion those are the best great job! |
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