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in the mind
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 12:39:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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then I feel
better
spiders trees
rain and
myself
high in a small
room
midwest Fall
drifting and
pushing
cat off
the bed/rocker
literary abuse
pen skimming
more paper
in the ten pm
moonlight
hunching
with ultimate
need
leaves
decaying
crawl
into
bed.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-10-14 12:39:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: in the mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 10:07:15 PM AEST (User
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Provoking and far out. I really enjoyed the depth and imagination in your lines. A journey of the mind and it's awesome that words can take us places and yours did here.
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Re: in the mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 02:12:09 AM AEST (User
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I must say I am really liking your work. This is full of depth and meaning, absolutely love it. Thanks for sharing. |
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